skan vs killian (smoke)

[skan-uk]

killian in bored so in gona tell you why i think yours doesnt look very good (im not saying mines good just helping) if you look at the letters some are different to others for example.

if you look at the S and the M they look like they were drawn in a box im not saying this if a bad style but you haven used this style all the way through the piece.

the M and the K are drawn with gaps unlike the other letters.

the O is kinda bubble style unlike the others.

none of yor letters are bad you just need to stick to one style throught and your pieces will look better. (i think the word flow)

hope this helps and if anyone wants to give advice on mine it would be good.

skan

[midnightbomber]

both arent great can i drop one in?

[Killian_graffiti]

of corse go right ahead :P

[Nesk]

Okay people. I'm starting a monthly battle as of today, it's still the beginning of hte month so It's not bad.

Word: It's just a letter, the letter A, dress it up as much as you want, give it a background or whatever.

Piece

Coloured

Character, not necessary but if you want go ahead.

This is basically to help out the toys work on their lettering, and giving some of the more skilled writer's something fun to do.

Come and join in, every one is welcome.
By the way, Submissions are to be PM'd to me, so as not to ruin the surprise. Any submissions stuck in this thread will not be counted in the poll.

Happy sketching!

[skan-uk]

im in whens the due date

[DeONerIsm]

skan toatly pwned the other guys ass..