10-31-2006, 03:49 PM
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Killian: nice, post it up when your done :D
oh yeah, happy halloween from me as well :D
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Originally Posted by midnightbomber if u bomb with real dudes ud get shot for crossn out dope dudes man. id never do it no matter how wack they got the potential and they try there a ARTIST in my book for TRYING. | WARNING!! Loneliness and condescencion can cause random nonsensical posts if applied to online forums. |
10-31-2006, 06:40 PM
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Ever scince i was young/
it was my tongue/
that started expressing itself the most/
asking for the bad ass lyrics of the east coast/.
At the age of twelve started smoking pot/
and let the insides of my brain rot./
Not going to school for me was even worse/
than my very first verse/.
I know tht sucked just again rymes and verses allstuck in my head
like a piece of molded bread
I cant seem to ever wanna stop
asking for more everytime.....
And those' r my rymes...
Peace....Ouuuuutttttt
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10-31-2006, 11:00 PM
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Killian: Try to think bout the flow, how it will sound when spoken and if it sounds good in your head while reading it. But its cool that your writing some. and words dont have to rhyme as long as it sounds good when its being rapped (if you think it sounds nice in your own head cuz your writin to some instrumental or something, write down the song name so you can go back and continue writing with the same beat and flow) . Take a look at the rhymes to some of the other people around here and see how they builded up theirs and how it sounds in your head while reading it. Try to think bout punchlines and be creative and use time on your rhymes when your writing them.
If you get some good ideas (i often get em while im at the bus) write it down on a piece of paper or your cellphone and work on em when you get home.
If you got any questions, be free to ask :D and keep posting your rhymes ;)
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¨When you look at a good throw up or a really nice piece, its like watching a good pornmovie. You wish you was there.¨
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¨When you meet your maker, what will you tell him you did with your life?.. WHOLE CARS!¨
-Smith
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Originally Posted by midnightbomber if u bomb with real dudes ud get shot for crossn out dope dudes man. id never do it no matter how wack they got the potential and they try there a ARTIST in my book for TRYING. | WARNING!! Loneliness and condescencion can cause random nonsensical posts if applied to online forums. |
10-31-2006, 11:13 PM
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wow thnx man i will ask questions.
I have one now acctually.LOL
ok so if u said im ryming to a specific beat then how do i write it down so y'all can c it? like da da da da dada da dada...or uing!! idk lol.... :P
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Closertoyou: I can\'t really post up pics of what kind of style I\'m after,mainly \'cause I\'m not after any style but my own
Blap4: IF U SAY ANY MORE MEAN THINGS ABOUT MY MUM IM GUNA... FUKIN..... ILL FUKIN. ERM...... ILL JUST LIKE ERM....... ILL.... JUST LIKE ERM...... TELL A TEACHER :twisted: BAHAHAHAHA UR FUKT NOW!!
Le Soir: i don\'t want to wait until fucking friday to see brap get waffle stomped =\'[ |
11-04-2006, 01:05 PM
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moahahahahha, no no, i was thinkin bout you! If your writing to some hiphop or instrumental you might go with another flow than you usally do and then its sometimes ok to write down wich song you was writing with so you understand how the flow goes if you want to continue wrting another time :p I do that sometimes :p but you dont think its any use xD
ex:
(apathy - paper mache)
babababbba ba ba babbba ab a
babb asd s asd f gg ghghhh gh h
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¨When you look at a good throw up or a really nice piece, its like watching a good pornmovie. You wish you was there.¨
-T
¨When you meet your maker, what will you tell him you did with your life?.. WHOLE CARS!¨
-Smith
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Originally Posted by midnightbomber if u bomb with real dudes ud get shot for crossn out dope dudes man. id never do it no matter how wack they got the potential and they try there a ARTIST in my book for TRYING. | WARNING!! Loneliness and condescencion can cause random nonsensical posts if applied to online forums. |
11-04-2006, 01:42 PM
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OH! lol ok i get it now :lol: LOL
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Mr. Breakfast: am down to earth with my head in the clouds.
Closertoyou: I can\'t really post up pics of what kind of style I\'m after,mainly \'cause I\'m not after any style but my own
Blap4: IF U SAY ANY MORE MEAN THINGS ABOUT MY MUM IM GUNA... FUKIN..... ILL FUKIN. ERM...... ILL JUST LIKE ERM....... ILL.... JUST LIKE ERM...... TELL A TEACHER :twisted: BAHAHAHAHA UR FUKT NOW!!
Le Soir: i don\'t want to wait until fucking friday to see brap get waffle stomped =\'[ |
11-05-2006, 09:39 PM
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so many faggots n black n white wannabe gangster people,
meet the reaper at the deeper level of dissin kids sweeter.
sweeter than sugar but harder than concrete when rhymin n writin meet,
six feet deep rhymes n sick verbal death over the internet,
go against tensor and the stakes are set goin allin with your name as the highest bet.
(some freestyle wack shit made within 4 minute, well anyways its a tribute and 30 sec reading of triumph when your reading this giant ¨hump..¨
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¨When you look at a good throw up or a really nice piece, its like watching a good pornmovie. You wish you was there.¨
-T
¨When you meet your maker, what will you tell him you did with your life?.. WHOLE CARS!¨
-Smith
(everyone, take notes) Quote: |
Originally Posted by midnightbomber if u bomb with real dudes ud get shot for crossn out dope dudes man. id never do it no matter how wack they got the potential and they try there a ARTIST in my book for TRYING. | WARNING!! Loneliness and condescencion can cause random nonsensical posts if applied to online forums. |
11-10-2006, 03:02 AM
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Yo gues diz da thread ima juz kck.....
Tacticz, n statics, gunz wit automaticz,
A tragic,mishapn,wen magic,getz clappin,./
Wit my 9 u knw I makin al my dreamz,/
Everytyme I'm out, im speakin cream/
Everytyme I hit da scene, I mke movz, 2 get da money out da feignz,../
N I won't stop, til I'm off da pot cookin awy wit beans,/
So clean, wen I'm pointin at ya wit my silencer beam./
............ breathe
Standin in the da street wit my heat, pointin 2 fingerz./
Schoolin fruit fuckz,they remind me of a pck of strawberry zingerz./ haha
No pressure, out 2 get ya, kinda heavy wen I wet ya./
Str8 spittin no breakz, 4 da latez, they wantd 40 barz, I'm given em 88/
Crazy 8z, 2 tonez, canz above my dressure/
Hit evry street, lke datz my address...a/
Takn ova mindz, robbin street cornerz/
Get al of minez,bombn lke boulderz/
..... breathe
Changn transitionz,da ambitionz iz my missionz,/
Catch me cookin rockz in my ladyz kitchen/
Telin copz suck my cock,iz my verbal escription,/
Deception, n devious, is al in my description/ whoo!!!
I'm out yo,
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DRIPS
\"STOP ME B4 I PAINT AGAIN\"
DRIPS
\"THE WORLD IS MY PLAYGROUND\"
DRIPS
\"IM ALREADY FAMOUS JUZ LOOK AT DA WALLS!\"
DRIPS
BATTLE RECORD
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MURDERED-5
CASKETED-0
WOUNDED-0
ASTOUNDED-1
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11-14-2006, 04:02 PM
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Nice shit drips, i love your rhymes! keep it up 8)
check out:
all my battles n rhymes is considered classic,
drastic, wraps your ¨skills¨ up in plastic,
always gettin 3 points like in basket. (5 votes total, 3 votes = ko, normal online battle rules)
on the mic like nymphoman rabbits,
got bad habbits but keepin myself outta un-medical tablets,
got lots of flow thats why they call me the master of battles,
always been a king between poetry masters, check the statics.
my rhymes are worth more than a pirate treasure and made to measure,
just put on one of my lyrics if you want another type of sexual pleasure.
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¨When you look at a good throw up or a really nice piece, its like watching a good pornmovie. You wish you was there.¨
-T
¨When you meet your maker, what will you tell him you did with your life?.. WHOLE CARS!¨
-Smith
(everyone, take notes) Quote: |
Originally Posted by midnightbomber if u bomb with real dudes ud get shot for crossn out dope dudes man. id never do it no matter how wack they got the potential and they try there a ARTIST in my book for TRYING. | WARNING!! Loneliness and condescencion can cause random nonsensical posts if applied to online forums. |
11-15-2006, 09:12 PM
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Yo tensor dat plastic line waz ill. Kuku
Out n about,taging my nme on da earth/
Quiet scouts,spot em gota run threw da dirt/
Run 4 life, or get charged witz sum tymes man/
Get caught, get stuck wit the crimes man/
Dnt stop, keep goin, gain yo respect/
Spot, drop,top, bomb, get out fast, or get checkd/
Suicide missions, givn all 2 risk da neck/
Adrenaline kcks in til u dne bombin, or yo last breathe/
Peace out. Inspired by last nite. Out nutn special juz got out my chest.
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\"2 SUM PPL HEAVINS IN A CAN\"
DRIPS
\"STOP ME B4 I PAINT AGAIN\"
DRIPS
\"THE WORLD IS MY PLAYGROUND\"
DRIPS
\"IM ALREADY FAMOUS JUZ LOOK AT DA WALLS!\"
DRIPS
BATTLE RECORD
~~~~~~~~~~~
MURDERED-5
CASKETED-0
WOUNDED-0
ASTOUNDED-1
LATEST VICTIM-BRAP pussyd out
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