Dokster: i have to give that 6.5, good ideas but it was hard to go on your flow.. and it was too much cock n shit for me even though it was for the ¨ladies¨.
(if you want to, you may comment this to, maybe it would be nice if each rhymer gave a comment to the rhyme over themselves.)
heres mine:
ill drop bombs n arms with lyrical intention,
substitute your real sense with rhymes from my generation.
direct words from this country is what you really need,
but if you go against me youll need help to breath.
maybe you got fame but i dont need that to crack your joint,
ill keep spittin and crack your flow if you get my point,
cus if you dont youll have to face the death with me in the front..
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Originally Posted by midnightbomber if u bomb with real dudes ud get shot for crossn out dope dudes man. id never do it no matter how wack they got the potential and they try there a ARTIST in my book for TRYING. | WARNING!! Loneliness and condescencion can cause random nonsensical posts if applied to online forums. |