can you help me please

[FRET1 AKA PILLA.B]

hey guys i have the same sorta problem like equip i want to improve y tag style heres what my tag looks like now

[SEPHEK]

oooh well, i can always say ive seen worse.
mkay first off get a new marker shit looks crusty....thats bad.
im guessing it says-sok- or -aok-, cant really tell.....the k is....allright, hmmm jus look around at other tags. i almost never encourage biting but its probably the easiest and fastest way to progress.

jus try and incorporate sections of letters from artists, DO NOT bite the entire letter, or ill hate u.
also loose the little tornado...it looks like shit.

no beef jus bein honest.

[graz]

try writing your name as if you where going to do a peice..
need to put more effort..

[obseen]

just keep tryin
and dont make your own thread with only one picture in it
if you do that then it will be moved to the trash can