look, i gave you something in the throwie thread, but ill give you some here too. AGE DOESNT FUCKING MATTER!!! i know some 15 year old kids that just started 2 weeks ago and have have better can control than some of these 23 year old guys whove done their shit over 8 years. so what does this prove us? painting intoxicated isnt good, it can result in you getting busted and WILL result in your lines being fucked up. anyway.......
i like the style youve gone for, never exactly the same, but thats what tones it down too. youve gone over yourself trying different techniques when you should be consentrating on the base of the consept: OUTLINES. first of all, no one is perfect, and thats why people do the basic outline 3-4 times (this differs from the person and his view of a perfect outline and its shape). basically im saying to go bigger, more basic, and look at your can control everytime, and look it hard. im not saying to look at the can, but observe where you trip / make a mistake and learn from that. also learn you distances from the wall, every spray paint has its own properties.
hopefully that wast full of shit. i like you, i like the way youre trying to keep all the "elements" of graff in the same measure, but unfortunately one cant upgade itself if one doesnt improve itself. damn, i have no idea if this cryptical code opens to anyone, but im still typing,typing,typing..... anyway, KEEP YOUR SHIT UP, AND AFTER THAT DO IT AGAIN, AND AGAIN, AGAIN, AGAIN, AND AGAIN.