Yeah don't make the ying yang unless you're filling the O with it as a fill.
like so.

That basic idea of course. my letters are different, But yeah, the P still looks fucked up. Do teh saem thing to the P you did with the R.
And DO NOT, I repeat NOT attach the whole piece with that line underneath. That's retarded. Like yougot lazy or some shit.
I liek your fill though? Manually? Or Pc?